Saturday 22 November 2014

The FIRST read-through of my NaNoWriMo draft and my verdict


On Monday (after thirty minutes of procrastination because I was scared of what horrors I might find amidst the sea of words) I started reading through my NaNoWriMo first draft.

I uploaded the (much feared) draft to the kindle app on my phone to make it seem more like a book than a word document and as I read it, I made notes on my laptop of what I needed to change.

After reading the first draft, I sorted out the notes I had made into three categories. These were:

1) Easy edits.
2) Name changes and parts to go over.
3) Facts & figures.

I find when I break down problems and organise them into a list like this, my OCD brain flies through it much quicker than it would otherwise.

VERDICT ON THE FIRST DRAFT:
I have to say, I was pleasantly surprised by what I read. I came away from it excited to start editing and with the realisation that there was not too much to change. With the kind of story it is, I feel less is more and too much editing would make it ... sterile?

When I read through the first book I had ever written last year, the inaugural read-through was hilarious and I wrote lines that now only resurface in my nightmares ... still, I was surprised with that one too on the whole.

From Monday night until now (Saturday night) I worked through parts 1 & 2 of the list at lightning speed while concurrently going through the entire book for general grammar and lines I wanted to change etc.

I have finished my second draft (now standing at a total of 59,308 words) and will be reading through it again in the morning on my kindle, making yet another list of changes.

I hope this post wasn't too confusing. My excuse is that ALL day, EVERY day since Monday night, I have been staring at my laptop and there is a strong likelihood that my brain has melted.

To those who might happen to come across my blog (who are not my mother) and are in the middle of NaNoWriMo, whatever you do and however far behind you are with your word count, DO NOT GIVE UP ... Because it feels great to get to the other side of 50,000.

Sunday 16 November 2014

My post NaNoWriMo 2014 revision plan

After 15 days of insanity writing my first ever NaNoWriMo draft, I have now come to terms with the fact that I will have to begin the actual hard work of revising and editing what I have just written *breaks down in corner of the room*

I have already forgotten the beginning of my book and am slightly scared of what I will find. Did I hallucinate and instead of writing sentences, I just wrote Once Upon a Time followed by jsdksjf kljkfjsdk jkfdjfksd. The End?

I know you are meant to sit on the first draft for a month or so, go off and do other things then read through it but I am leaving only a DAY before I read it through because:
a) I am impatient.
b) I need to know how bad/good it is.
c) I need to write more words because I still have the sickness.
d) I am enjoying this experience too much not to.

After finishing the draft yesterday morning, I came away from it feeling great and pretty positive with what the read-through would be like … but as the hours tick by, I am doubtful of my over-confidence. 

Fresh faced on Monday morning I plan to start, and this is my personal revision plan:
1) Read through the whole book and make a list of all the major things wrong with it and inconsistencies with the plot and characters.
2) Tackle everything on that (very long, I imagine) list.
3) Keep going through the book with a fine tooth comb until I am 100000000% satisfied.
4) Let my mum read it and tell me her honest opinion of it.
5) Tell Mum she is wrong and doesn't know what she is talking about when she tells me that there are things she would change.
6) Cry a bit after realising everything I have written is only fit for my computer's recycle bin and Mum was right.
7) Eat some chocolate and/or ice cream to make myself feel better from reading all the ludicrous characters and plot holes I have just written.
8) Go for a walk and tell myself I am a terrible writer.
9) Repeat steps 6, 7 and 8 at least ten times.
10) Start again.

I have only ever written one book in my life before this and I am happy with the way revisions turned out then so I will do the same for this one too. I know it’s a very basic plan but after looking at countless blogs and advice from a plethora of amazing writers, this is the way I enjoy and find most comfortable for me.  

(Of course the chocolate and/or ice cream means chocolate AND ice cream).

Saturday 15 November 2014

My first NaNoWriMo

This morning I finished the first draft of my NaNoWriMo 2014 novel (which shall remain nameless, for now) which is a total of 57,337 words.

I know it is only the 15th and I still have half a month left but from the 6th I went slightly insane and decided to push myself to write approximately 5,000 words a day.

I gave myself a 5,000 word a day goal because:

1) I wanted to see if I could do it.
2) I couldn't stop myself writing.
3) I wanted to finish it early.
4) I must be a borderline masochist.

At first I just wanted to stick to the 1,667 words a day because I thought it would add to the fun of it, but after a few days, I found it harder to stop writing, so in the end ... I didn't.

My daily word counts were:
Saturday 1st November - 1,696 words
Sunday 2nd November - 1,739 words
Monday 3rd November - 1,736 words
Tuesday 4th November - 1,893 words
Wednesday 5th November - 1,713 words
Thursday 6th November - 5,033 words
Friday 7th November - 6,339 words
Saturday 8th November - 6,382 words
Sunday 9th November - 3,580 words
Monday 10th November - 5,041 words
Tuesday 11th November - 4,910 words
Wednesday 12th November - 5,028 words
Thursday 13th November - 4,917 words
Friday 14th November - 5,931 words
Saturday 15th November - 1,399 words

TOTAL - 57,337 words

Honestly, now it is finished, I feel a bit bereft so to try and tackle this, I have spent the best part of the evening setting up this blog, a twitter & instagram account and all manner of other things to soothe my lonely (but aching) fingers.

What I have learnt from my first NaNoWriMo:
1) I adore writing. 
2) If I set myself a goal, I can reach it.
3) I have learnt a lot about myself.
4) If I write for long periods, I get a twitch in my right eye.

Thank you NaNoWriMo and I can't wait until next year.